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Let Me Live Here Ever
Kink bingo square: food
KAB RPF. 2700 words. NC-17. Kris/Andrew.

The whole love thing sneaks up on Kris slowly, until he wakes up one day and there it is. [Story 25/25 of Life Is Waiting For You.]


The first thing Kris sees when he wakes up in the morning is a silhouette in his doorway. For a few moments he thinks it's Cale, then Ryland, then Andrew, before he realizes it's too short for any of them. Too short for anyone he lives with. He squints at the doorway, then smiles.

"Katy?"

"You'd better believe it," she says, then jumps onto her knees at the end of his bed. "Time to get up."

"Who let you in?" he says.

"That depends," says Katy. "Are you going to punish them, or thank them?"

"Both," says Kris, and sits up and rubs his eyes and reaches out for a hug, which she crawls up the bed to give him.

"It'd be just my luck if your boyfriend came in right now, huh?"

"It would be just mine," says Kris, but he already knows all about Katy. He already knows all of the important things about Kris. If he came in right now, he would probably just join them on the bed. "Cale?"

"Of course," says Katy. "He's already eating breakfast. You have a long day ahead of you."

"Yeah, a long day of waiting in the sun," says Kris, wondering if he can sneak at least a few more minutes of sleep. Probably not, with Katy in the room.

"So where is he, anyway?"

"Cale?"

"Your boyfriend," says Katy. "I wasn't gonna bust in on you like this till Cale told me you were sleeping alone."

"He's at his own apartment," says Kris. "He'll be here in—" He squints at the clock. "—an hour or so. Maybe two. What time is it anyway?"

Katy fetches his glasses instead of answering him.

"It's time to get up," she says, "or the next time someone jumps on your bed, it won't be me."

Katy's already met his boyfriend a couple of times so at least they're not meeting today in the middle of what will probably be chaos, with Kris's whole family coming up for the ceremony, and probably a bunch of friends too. But he'll worry about all that after he wakes up. And eats.

"Maybe I welcome people jumping on my bed these days," Kris says, but a moment later he's finally getting up, thankfully having worn something to bed, which he doesn't always these days, and they head together to breakfast.

They're in the middle of another shift in the roommate situation, and due for at least one more before the beginning of the year. Steve finally decided to strike out in the world, so he's putting all his things in storage and going out on the road next week with a local band that's doing big things. After that, who knows, but Kris figures he'll keep their couch free, just in case. And Ryland announced that he and his girlfriend finally got engaged and they're going to be looking for a place together for the fall. They're both such staples of the place that it's going to be weird to have them both gone.

But then, Kris has things to look forward to, too, because Steve leaving freed up a room just when Andrew was looking for a new place to live. They actually thought it through, talked about the pros and cons and didn't just jump into it, but in the end they both knew what they wanted to do.

Kris wonders if he should warn him about the traditional naked breakfast.

They're in the middle of eating when Andrew does show up, letting himself in and planting a kiss on top of Kris's head before so much as acknowledging anyone else is in the room.

"Katy!" he says finally when he notices she's there. "I thought we weren't going to be seeing you till the ceremony."

"I drove up last night," she admits. "Split a hotel room with a friend of mine who was coming up too, so I could come over here first thing. How are you doing?"

"Great," says Andrew, and kisses Kris's head again before sitting down right beside him, practically thigh to thigh. "Excited."

"I don't know why you're so excited," says Kris. "I'm the one who's graduating. You already did this last year, before you decided you wanted to go to school for a couple more years."

"Exactly," says Andrew. "All the fun and none of the stress. Is there any cereal left?"

"There are pancakes on the table and you want cereal?" says Cale from across the table. "Really?"

"No, he wants cereal first, then pancakes," says Kris. "Yeah, but it's in the cupboard so you're going to have to get it yourself. And the milk might be bad."

"No it's not," says Andrew. "I bought it two days ago."

"You bought the milk?" says Ryland. "Really?"

"You were out and I needed some," says Andrew with a shrug. "So what do you guys need me to do? Are there any last minute emergencies yet?"

"Only that my sister had car trouble and is running late," says Cale. "Otherwise we're golden. My Katy should be here any minute now to help me get ready."

"And I," says Katy, "will help make sure this place is in shape for later."

"You don't have to—"

"Do you think I came over just to wake you up?" says Katy. Kris just sort of looks at her. "Okay, I would've done that anyway, but as long as I'm here I should be useful, and I think you've got enough help getting you dressed."

Kris doesn't so much need help getting dressed as he wants some time alone with Andrew before his family arrives, so he kisses her cheek in thanks and they finish their breakfast over small talk before Kris and Andrew find a good moment to slip away together.

"So are you really excited about today?" says Kris as he closes his bedroom door.

"I'm excited about your commencement," says Andrew. "I'm excited about the party afterwards. I think I'm more nervous than excited about the part in between."

"You don't have anything to worry about," says Kris. "I promise."

"Yeah, no pressure or anything," says Andrew, "it's just your parents. It's not like I need to make a good impression or something."

"I don't even know how you think you're going to make a bad impression," says Kris. "You'd have to actively try."

"Pretty sure they're not thrilled about us living together," says Andrew. "Even with the separate rooms thing."

"They just want to meet you first," says Kris. Maybe his parents would've been happier if Andrew wasn't moving into Steve's old room next week, but if that's the case they've never breathed a word of it to him. It's not like they can gently suggest he wait until he's married, and Kris doesn't think they would've done that anyway, not once they knew he was being serious and responsible.

There's a small part of Kris that still expected to end up with a girl in the end, married with children and the whole deal. It's a little hard to admit, feels almost like denial, but it's true. That all changed with Andrew. With Andrew, Kris just stopped looking. Not all at once, not in a flash of revelation, but at some point after dating for a few months Kris woke up and saw Andrew there and realized that he hadn't even thought about anyone else in a long time.

It was almost like coming out to his parents a second time when he told them. For him at least, if not for them. Somehow it was different saying, "I kind of like guys as well as girls," than it was saying, "There's this guy I think I want to stay with for keeps."

But there is, and he does.

"I'm trying not to think about it too much," says Andrew. "If I overthink it, I really will make a fool of myself and say all the wrong things and spill mustard on the front of your mother's favorite dress."

"Andrew?"

"Yeah?"

"You're already overthinking it."

"Right," he says, and lets Kris give him a soft, quick kiss to distract him. It's a promise of more to come later, even more so than on any other day. "Okay. Let's get you ready to finally be done with college.

*

Kris wasn't wrong about the ceremony. It was a lot of waiting around in the sun for that one moment when his name was called and he was given his degree and he was officially, wholly and completely finished with college. Or in Kris's case, a lot of waiting around after hearing his name called so that they could get through the rest of the alphabet.

But he wasn't wrong about dinner with his parents either. All Andrew had to do was be himself and his parents understood exactly what Kris saw in him, and why they were ready to start making some tentative long-term plans. Even his brother was surprisingly cool. It wasn't like there weren't moments of awkwardness, brief lapses in conversation when no one knew quite what to say, but overall it was good. It was really good. And afterwards, Kris definitely got their blessing.

They know he has plans for tonight so they made other plans of their own, but he promises to meet them for brunch the next day before they head home again and they're the ones who invite Andrew to join them as well. A invitation that is happily accepted.

Afterwards is what they've really been looking forward to. The ceremony was a necessary formality in uncomfortable clothing, though Kris has to admit there was a little zing of accomplishment when he held his degree in his hands, but the celebration to mark the end of his—and Cale's, and Megan's—college careers is the real point of today, and everybody is going to be there.

"So," says Andrew as they get into Kris's car. "We've got at least two hours before anyone's going to start showing up for the party. You want to get something to eat? Kill some time in your bedroom?"

"Yes and yes," says Kris, steering straight for home. There's more than enough food and drink there, and after everything he's already been through today Kris doesn't want to make any other stops.

"I see you already have a plan," says Andrew. "Am I going to approve?"

"My entire plan involves you, me, champagne, and my bedroom," says Kris. "If you approve of that, then we're golden."

"We're golden," says Andrew. "We are so golden that we're made of gold."

Kris grins and turns on the radio and only speeds a little bit on his way home, but it's enough to shave a couple of minutes off the drive. He doesn't just grab the champagne he's been saving but also some of the food that Megan stashed in their fridge when the one upstairs got full. He thinks Tommy must've made the lopsided cheese things, but it's the thought that counts and Kris steals some of those too before he shuts them up in his room.

"We aren't even going to need the party later," says Andrew. "We've got our own party right here."

"This," says Kris, "is an entirely different kind of party."

He puts the refreshments down on his desk and immediately starts unbuttoning Andrew's shirt, his tie already chucked into the back seat of Kris's car along with Kris's. Kris regrets that only because they would've been really handy to tie someone up with, but he files that away for another day.

Once the shirt goes he starts on the pants, till Andrew laughs and tries to slow him down. "Food first?"

"I just want to get our clothes off first," says Kris. "That's all I want. Then we can do...whatever. Anything."

"I accept this alteration to the plan," says Andrew with a thoughtful nod of his head, and starts in on Kris's clothes too. With both of them working at it, despite the occasionally tangled limbs they're done in no time.

Kris points at the bed, then grabs the serving tray he left on the desk and brings it with him, sweeping a few things out of the way and setting it down on the bedside table. Andrew stretches out on his side, propped up on his elbow, and Kris grabs one of the bits of fruit he's snatched from the fridge and offers it to him, a little wedge of melon.

Andrew eats it from his fingers, and Kris follows it with a kiss.

"I think I'm going to like this plan a lot," says Andrew, and Kris laughs and grabs something else, a grape this time.

"Are you going to like it just as much when you're the one feeding me?" says Kris. "I think I've earned it today. I am a college graduate now, after all."

"Amazing," says Andrew, letting Kris feed him again, and again, every bite followed by a kiss, or a nip, or a little lick somewhere nice.

When Andrew finally flips them over, traps Kris against the bed with his knees and reaches for the tray, Kris's stomach is traitorously rumbling a little bit. Not that he doesn't want Andrew to feed him, but they've been at this long enough now that Kris would've been happy moving on to...other things.

"You want this?" says Andrew, playfully holding a strawberry up just out of reach of Kris's mouth. Kris makes a couple of abortive tries at it, then finally surges upwards and snatches it with his teeth and gives Andrew's fingers a little nip while he's at it. "I guess so."

He does it again with a cracker, and with one of Tommy's surprisingly delicious cheese things. And then he leans in and gives Kris a long, searing kiss instead of more food.

"I think that’s what I'm hungry for now," says Kris, biting gently at Andrew's lower lip.

"Hungry for that, or hungry for this?" says Andrew, rubbing up against Kris's hip.

"I have to choose?" says Kris, and grabs him so they can kiss again.

Andrew never makes him choose, though. As he continues to kiss Kris he also manages to blindly reach for the lube, knowing exactly where they left it, and finger him open with strong, sure motions. There's a little bit of cherry juice on Kris's nipple and Andrew sucks that off as he strokes him before finally moving into position and pushing Kris's hips up and sliding right into him, like he has so many times before.

Kris exhales happily and closes his eyes for a moment, and when he opens them Andrew is holding a strawberry at his lips with his other hand, waiting for him to take a bite. It's almost shocking in its intimacy. Kris opens his mouth and lets Andrew put the strawberry inside, and then sucks the juice from Andrew's fingers as he begins to thrust inside him.

Nothing about this is frantic, it's just lovely and slow and familiar and when his orgasm rises up in him, Andrew deep inside him and his hand around Kris's cock, Kris actually laughs as he comes. Laughs and kisses and wraps his whole body around Andrew's as he brings himself off too.

He feeds Andrew a raspberry afterwards, and Andrew licks his whole hand clean.

"Just think," says Andrew when they finally separate and stretch out and begin to tangle around one another. "We haven't even started on the champagne yet."

Kris just laughs and snuggles in closer.

They've got about half an hour before they have to get up and get ready for people to start showing up, and Kris intends to spend that entire half hour lying in bed with Andrew, talking about music and friends and plans for the future.

It's hard to believe that college is over, but the rest of his life is just beginning.



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Date: 2010-09-30 07:33 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (krandrew. [kris allen and andrew derober)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
<33333 bb

I mean, how else can I reply to this than to say, KRANDREEEEEEEWWWW! :D

Date: 2010-09-01 06:04 pm (UTC)
ext_11633: (ai8 - kris; come cuddle)
From: [identity profile] oatmeal-cookie.livejournal.com
I don't even know what to say. First of all, seriously, you're a freaking rockstar for even taking this on, and I swear my heart skipped a few beats when I refreshed my flist and saw the masterpost. I'm so happy and so proud of you, is that weird? It's not even that you provided us with all this glorious porn (which is so so hot and amazing and wonderful) but because on top of it all, this whole thing is just an amazing exploration of Kris's character all throughout. It's all him, through and through, from his heartbreakingly beautiful relationship with Katy, to his first, tentative steps on the way to self-discovery with Cale (ugh, they're so adorable and sweet and their friendship makes me want to vomit rainbows), to that gorgeous summer with Cook, to all the lessons he's learned with all the people in his life - and it's just perfect, that's what college is, it's growing up, all about opening your eyes to the big, big world out there and meeting and falling in love in different ways with with people.

Kris is just so sweet and giving and respectful and such a good partner to everyone, which of course he would be, he can't be anything else; overflowing with reassurance when needed, very much willing to let others take the lead, so steady and mellow and just open for all of it. He has such a healthy perspective on everything that he did, always made sure he was on the same page with the people he did it with. Slutty!Kris is the best Kris, obviously, but he's not just in it to get off - there's a kind of intimacy, a connectionunderneath every encounter however brief. It's all so, so gorgeous.

And finally, I don't have words to tell you how happy I am that Krandrew was endgame. <3_____<3 From that afternoon in the shower, Andrew being the one that got away and how freaking ADORABLE they were in "prison" oh god I can't stop grinning. :333 Ugh, I love that there was an underlying love story through all of this, that there was something Kris didn't know he was looking for until he found it, and I'm so happy for him, so happy for them and I'm dying of presh at how broken-in and domestic and easy it is in this last installment.

He already knows all of the important things about Kris. If he came in right now, he would probably just join them on the bed.

OMG HOW PRESH IS THAT. I DIED. I DIIIIIIIIIIIIED. *__________* Like I told [livejournal.com profile] arabella_hope, I was such a good girl and read through this whole thing chronologically, and I kept wanting to tell Kris (...and myself, WAT), don't worry, you're so close, The One You're Waiting For is coming soon, for now just enjoy this and then there he was, finally, leaning against that wall and then they fell in love eeeeeeeeeeee. :DDDDD

I love this, all of it, and I love you, and I love the whole world and boom de yada boom de yada~~~ PERFECT, STUNNING FLAWLESS, EPIC, ETC ETC ETC <333333333

Date: 2010-09-01 11:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrsmaggiemae.livejournal.com
you speak the words i am not coherent enough to say. :D

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Date: 2010-09-01 06:50 pm (UTC)
northern: "northern" written in gray text across a raven (Default)
From: [personal profile] northern
<3 That was such a good idea, to make your whole bingo card the same story!

Date: 2010-09-30 10:42 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you! It was so much work, but so rewarding when I finally finished. :D

Date: 2010-09-01 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bglbayley.livejournal.com
Like Patmeal, I read the entire thing in chronological order (and I didn't even click on the pairings lists or headings because I wanted to just get into the story and not have the future/endings ruined for me).

I have the biggest, goofiest grin on my face right now after reading this whole thing. It was a beautiful self-discovery/love story, and I'm so, so happy for your Kris at the end. It was perfect, and lovely (and omg so freaking hot unnnnnfffff - *ahem* but you knew I'd react to some of these chapters that way already *ahem*.

Also, thanks for the shout-out in Chapter 2. ;)

Date: 2010-10-01 03:36 am (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
I feel like I tortured you whenever we talked about it by not revealing the endgame, but I so feel like it's a series that's best left to ~unfold, if you're not OTP and are the kind of person who would enjoy discovering it as you went along. :D

(And I know allllllll your secrets, gurl. :D )

Thank you so much! <33333

Date: 2010-09-01 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuppielawyer.livejournal.com
Ok, so today was a sick day for a me, so I spent all morning reading this from start to finish, and I don't even know what to say. I loved following Kris's exploration and discovery and his fun and his finally falling in love and . . . I am just not really coherent right now.

You are such an amazing writer, and I would probably read anything you wrote, about any real person or fictional character, but to be able to read so many glorious stories, or, really, one long story, about Kris was just heaven for me.

Thank you so much!

Date: 2010-10-01 09:40 am (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank YOU so much, bb! I just adore writing about him so much. I feel like I'm never going to run out of stories to tell. :DDD

Date: 2010-09-01 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chosenfire28.livejournal.com
GOD WTF DID YOU DO TO MY DAY??????

I swear I was just going to read the Adam/Kris ones, and then I loved them and wanted to see the Kris/Brad one, then the words "fucking machine" were in the Kris/Anoop one so I had to check that out and that made me really really want to read more about the verse so I checked out the Kris/Cale ones and then I started over and went in order and OMFG THIS SERIES!!!!

I absolutely love it so much, and OMG Kris/Andrew awwwwww and I swear you could write any Kris pairing and I would believe it, because your characterization is beyond stunning.

I hope you are insanely proud of yourself because this is something that is amazing!!!!!!

Date: 2010-09-05 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] escribej.livejournal.com
GOD WTF DID YOU DO TO MY DAY??????

^THIS.... Wow, I just could not stop reading this. Amazing. Fun. Hot. Well drawn. I was just riveted.

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Date: 2010-09-01 10:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coolwhipdiva.livejournal.com
Good thing about having free time is I GOT T READ THE WHOLE THING IN ONE SITTING, chronologically. What an ambitious project! I love how well the whole thing hangs together. And I will always love your Kris voice. It didn't even matter when I wasn't real familiar with some of the pairings, because the narrative and the character development was just that good. I still wanted to know about them anyway.

That being said, thanks for getting Adam in there twice!

Date: 2010-10-01 06:34 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!! And I always knew Adam was going to be important to Kris's life, even if they didn't end up together. :DDD

Date: 2010-09-02 12:07 am (UTC)
ext_379681: (krandrew)
From: [identity profile] ohmygod13.livejournal.com
I just adore your writing. I read pairings that I would never read otherwise just because your writing is so amazing. I loved all of these and I did the most insane flail dance when I realized that Krandrew were going to end up together in the end. Just amazing, I just love you.

Date: 2010-10-01 06:55 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, and I'm glad you gave all the pairings a chance, even the weird ones! :D

Date: 2010-09-02 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] db050275.livejournal.com
i.......i have no words. you are just so beyond amazing, you can write anything and make it amazing. you made me read pairings i thought i would never ever read and made me enjoy it.

and i adore krandrew so much, so the fact that they ended up together just....you have no idea how happy i was. you made my heart melt with this entire thing. i love you <3333333333

Date: 2010-10-01 06:57 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!! I'm really glad that people liked how it all ended up. :D

Date: 2010-09-02 01:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scarlett-o.livejournal.com
This was awesome. Totally made my day. Read it in chronological order and it was great how you showed Kris growing and changing. The whole thing seemed very natural and in character. Great job!

Date: 2010-10-01 06:58 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!! :D

Date: 2010-09-02 04:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tagalongcookies.livejournal.com
I read it in chronological order, and your character development throughout is amazing. I love how we see all the layers of Kris unfold throughout the story. I also love how well each story stands on its own, but it's deepened by reading them all together. A personal favorite is probably the Kris/David Cook one, although they are all great.

You just--you crafted this whole thing so well, it's so wonderful, and it's an amazing accomplishment. Great job <333333

Date: 2010-10-07 03:27 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (skin. [david cook])
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I have to admit, the Kris/Dcook one is one of my favourites too. :D

Date: 2010-09-02 04:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] milliejupiter.livejournal.com
I don't think there are actual words capable of rendering my feelings for this fic, but here are some of the ones that come close: brilliant, gorgeous, fascinating, scorching, ridiculous, adorable, heartwarming, perfect. I just.... thank you so much for creating this universe and sharing it with us (I'm getting a little verklempt haha maybe I shouldn't have stayed up until 1 am finishing it) I will be back to reread a few times I'm sure. ♥♥♥

Date: 2010-10-07 04:34 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, hon! ♥ This was definitely a project done for the love of it, and I'm still both delighted and astonished that I actually managed to pull it off in the end. :DD

Date: 2010-09-02 03:32 pm (UTC)
ext_16765: (Default)
From: [identity profile] arabella-hope.livejournal.com
OK, here we go.

First of all, the fact that you even thought to tackle such a tremendous project blows my mind, but it's you and you're obviously all sorts of goal-oriented and amazing. So we'll just get that gushing and fangirling out of the way right now. This is everything I could have ever wanted in the 'slut-kris' sense, but it's not even him being slutty: it's just him being open and in the moment and him.

Watching any character grow throughout a fic is always the most amazing part, and having them recognize the truths about themselves that is apparent to the reader is so satisfying. It's satisfying when a writer can MAKE those things into something you can sense without stating it outright, just through reactions and thoughts. The common thread of Kris's ~type, that he oh-so-doesn't want to admit (labels? PFFT) but eventually comes to understand and even learns to give himself over to....yes. That is just so perfectly done here.

Also, that he's never the one to pursue these 'adventures'. It feels so natural and comfortable and as a reader, that level of understanding between every character is so pure, overwhelming and good. Yes, the porn is hot, but the connections that Kris & whoever have obviously made are what makes every experience special.

Mostly, though, what I love the most is your use of kinks. They're never just a stop on the way to formulaic kink-prep-fucking, but explored in their own for how they make the characters react, how they are the driving force to get someone off. That's so special and rare to find -- and difficult, even I know how hard it is not to fall into that comfort zone of 'this comes next' when writing -- and one of my favorite things about how you write.

Also your sense of timing and comedy. And pitc-perfect snark and banter. And and and.

Maybe I wasn't done fangirling. I adore you, love, and am awed by you and so blessed that you're the chill person you are. Thank you for this fic, truly ♥

Date: 2010-10-07 04:52 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
FUCK YOU MADE ME CRY

♥ ♥ ♥

Seriously, though, thank you so much, because it makes me feel so squishy to hear that everything I was trying to do with this story, from the growth to the kinks to the relationships, worked for you. :D

Date: 2010-09-02 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eccentrikita.livejournal.com
I really like the whole you made out of these parts. Thank you. <3

Date: 2010-10-07 04:52 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :D

Date: 2010-09-03 01:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] poppetawoppet.livejournal.com
well my comment is going to be noncoherent and IDEK

first of all you gave me rare pairings, I mean who writes Kregan? (me eventually). Who writes Kranoop (me eventually)? NO ONE WRITES KRAVID BUT ME AND JEHANE18.

Then you give me perfect Kradam and on top of it you make KRANDREW the endgame omg I can't even.

(also an epilogue in which Andrew discovers exactly how Kris met him would me AWESOME. Not that I'm pressuring you)

Date: 2010-10-07 04:56 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :D (There may or may not be some Kris/Andrew timestamps... :D ) There were definitely some rarest of rare pairings in here, but I loved doing them all. Oh, Kris. So very ~friendly.

Date: 2010-09-03 04:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orihara-kaoru.livejournal.com
Why is it over? :'(((

Well, that was a HIGHLY satisfying read! Thank you so much for taking us on the journey of Kris's self-discovery. So interesting to note all the ways he's changed - but also stayed essentially Kris - from beginning to end.

Loved all the little details, too, like his friendship with Cale, his membership in the campus GLBT group (he was braver than I!), and Katy coming in at the end, creating a full-circle moment. :)

I know I've said this before, but there arey VERY few writers who would be capable of writing multiple pairings PERIOD - but to have them all in one fic and make it WORK? Seriously, it's amazing. You are amazing.

<333333333333333333

Date: 2010-10-11 03:24 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, bb! It was a relief when I was finished this, but I was also like "wait, no! what do I do now? I want to staaaaay." XD At least a few little details of the campus GLBT group were definitely taken from my own experiences. >.>

Date: 2010-09-03 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lokte.livejournal.com
What an amazing set of stories. Thank you!

Date: 2010-10-11 03:24 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! :D

Date: 2010-09-05 12:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vanya-elda.livejournal.com
WOW

It's been a couple hours since I finished and I'm still incoherent when it comes to my feelings for this fic. I JUST. CAN'T. EVEN...

WOW

Date: 2010-10-11 03:28 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you, bb! :DD

Date: 2010-09-08 02:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] painted-birdie.livejournal.com
FUCK YOU MADE ME CRY, AND YOU KNOW WHAT A CYNICAL HARDACRE I CAN BE ;__;

Okay. Okay, so a lot of people have already said a lot of really nice things about this, and I agree with basically all of them, but I'm going to add a few more and hopefully they'll make sense.

First of all, major, major kudos to you for even attempting this! You've drawn together such a cast of characters and done such justice to each of them, I'm totally in awe. My hat is off to you.

Second of all, while this kind of epic in size and scope, it felt so homey and familiar. Some of my favourite fics in this fandom are epic in this wonderful, crashing, ostentatious way, but this fic (these fics?) almost cheerfully tell the story of a guy coming into his own, sexually and otherwise. It's just awesome. I can't really put it all into words, but this was a total pleasure to read, from start to finish. You are so talented!

Lastly, thank you so much for putting so much time and effort into writing this, and for sharing it with the rest of us. I know what it is to put hours and hours of labour into something you believe in (in when others might not) and I totally appreciate what this must have put you through.

WE CAN HAZ DAQUIRIS NOW? :DDD

Date: 2010-10-11 05:02 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
NOW I WANT A DAIQUIRI

Thank you so much, bb, for this and for your comments all through the stories. :D I still want to live in this world a little bit sometimes, and find out what happens to him next.

Date: 2010-09-08 05:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bdr28.livejournal.com
what do I do now?! I've been reading this for days!

Amazing story, I loved seeing the progression and self-realization and evolution Kris went through, along with the sexual exploration and smut that you so kindly gave us. <3

Date: 2010-10-11 05:09 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :D

Date: 2010-09-10 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] livrelibre.livejournal.com
All of these stories are just lovely. It's such a good-hearted, happy-making, hot, and hopeful journey of discovery. Kudos!

Date: 2010-10-11 05:10 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you very much, bb!

Date: 2010-09-23 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wandermyfriends.livejournal.com
i wanted to read every part before I commented on this, because this was just wonderful! So freakin hot, and the journey that accompanied it was amazing. The Krandrew at the end was so sweet too omg! I wasn't expecting that.

i loved it! all of your hard work on this story really really shows. just amazing ♥

Date: 2010-10-11 05:56 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, bb! You know how long I was working on this, so yeah. A month later--MORE than a month later--I'm still totally jazzed it got done :D

Date: 2010-09-25 04:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goseaward.livejournal.com
I keep meaning to leave a comment on this and I keep forgetting! Anyway I wanted to rhapsodize about the whole thing and how awesome is Kris just sort of running into people who want to have sex with him and being a little kinky and just enjoying it? And about how you didn't give short shrift to the girls part of being bi? And, you know, it was hot and stuff. So yes. Thanks. :D

Date: 2010-10-11 06:00 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! And, I mean, doesn't everyone who runs into Kris want to have sex with him a little? :DDD

Date: 2010-10-12 08:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] proserpina-kore.livejournal.com
I have no idea how I missed this when you first posted it, but OMG!!!!!! I just finished and I adore this like an adoring thing. Kris is so gorgeous! I love how these things just happen to him and he goes along with them so beautifully. All the other characters are just so perfect too. Thank you for a sexy, hot, fun read :D

Date: 2010-10-30 04:43 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (presh. [kris allen])
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I had an amazing time writing this. :D

Date: 2011-01-26 09:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] musik19.livejournal.com
I'm horrible with leaving coherent thought out comments on fic. I started reading just the Kris/Cale and Kris/Andrew parts (wayyy late) and I didn't realize it was a larger fic until some people told me to read it chronologically. Then I finally started did read it all and OMG I love it so much. There is too much I love and my words won't cover them. All the Krale :DDDD And it ends with Krandrew <333333

Date: 2011-02-02 09:38 pm (UTC)
ext_1409: maple leaf (presh. [kris allen])
From: [identity profile] cjmarlowe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, bb! <333

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