Very interesting premise! And, of course, I loved the slow evolution of Adam and Kris's relationship.
One thing that I thought you did very well, though, was the action scenes. I mean, they are not exactly common (lol) in AI fic, and I thought they were the exact right combination of thrilling and satisfying. :D
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
no subject
Date: 2010-08-04 07:45 pm (UTC)Very interesting premise! And, of course, I loved the slow evolution of Adam and Kris's relationship.
One thing that I thought you did very well, though, was the action scenes. I mean, they are not exactly common (lol) in AI fic, and I thought they were the exact right combination of thrilling and satisfying. :D
ANYWAY, I LOOOOOOOVED IT OMG YAY!