That was fabulous! I loved seeing the changes you made and how fully fleshed out the world was while still remaining the story and the Sam and Dean we know. Everyone was awesome, including the side characters new and old--Jo(e), Pamela, the Indian captain, the widow Collins, Mazanahoton. Some of the moments in the story were so cinematic it was like I could see them--the airships, that moment in the Sioux territory with the clockwork thunderbird and white buffalo, Pam riding at them. And can I tell you how much I love that the final showdown included steampunk robots and Jessica's laser? All in all this was a cracking great story!
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Date: 2009-06-17 09:26 pm (UTC)