Amazing! I hafta say I have a soft spot for Heidi in my heart brings back fond memories of my childhood =) I really liked the pacing of this, and that even though it was the romance and Jensen and his issues, it was still about Jared and his life. His voice comes through very clearly, and I like how you made him happy without being overly sentimental about it. His life wasn't easy, but he acknowledged and made do, which is cool. Anyways, enough rambling, this was awesomely wonderful!!
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Date: 2009-04-24 10:01 pm (UTC)I really liked the pacing of this, and that even though it was the romance and Jensen and his issues, it was still about Jared and his life. His voice comes through very clearly, and I like how you made him happy without being overly sentimental about it. His life wasn't easy, but he acknowledged and made do, which is cool. Anyways, enough rambling, this was awesomely wonderful!!