Awesome! I love this whole steampunk vibe that's going on. You've got a deft hand at world building and I was very easily drawn into this story. I love your turn of phrase at time as well. This fic is very elegantly crafted and I'm definitely adding it to my Delicious account so I can read it again and again.

(My compliments to the artist as well! I love the style used - everyone looks amazing!)